I started writing this story back in 2009 and I realize now that I did not put a very good effort into completing the story, let a lone the grammar in the story which, when it's bad, takes away from the overall quality. I'm very sorry. I'm also posting to tell you folks that I have a twitter account (beerock26) that I will use periodically to promote materials I've written. I also have a WordPress page that I use quite frequently, it's http://speakgreaterthings.wordpress.com. Please stop by, check out some of the material, and leave your comments. Thank you
I appreciate the comments you folks gave me regarding this story. They've greatly encouraged me to pursue a career as a writer. My prayer is that I can have published novels, short stories and screenplays. If the Lord will give me the grace and integrity to accomplish my goals. God bless you all, and again, thank you!
-Kimberly Andrea Brock